Tuesday, January 15, 2008

Poem Analyzed in Class

Silver
Walter De La Mare
 
Slowly, silently, now the moon
Walks the night in her silver shoon;
This way, and that, she peers, and sees
Silver fruit uopn silver trees;
One by one the casements catch
Her beams beneath the silvery thatch;
Couched in his kennel, like a log,
With paws of silver sleeps the dog;
From their shadowy cote the white breasts peep
Of doves in silver-feathered sleep;
A harvest mouse goes scampering by,
With silver claws, and silver eye;
And moveless fish in the water gleam,
By silver reeds in a silver stream.
 
 
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*  Can you see in your mind the scene the poet describes?
 
*  Try and imagine the same scene by the light of the sun.
Rewrite the poem, beginning;
 
Slowly, silently, now the sun
Walks the day as his work gets done;
This way, and that, he peers and sees.....
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(Remember that you are referring to the sun this time.  Remember also that the sun was referred to as a HE, unlike the moon described as a SHE.  What does the sun do?  Look at the pattern, style and literary devises used in the poem and decide what to do with your new creation.  Goodluck!)

4 comments:

Nest said...

Dear.Mr.Perico

Can I write in the microsoftword?

Anonymous said...

Dear Mr.Perico

I have read it and understood it.

Thanks by Vincent

Anonymous said...

Golden

Slowly,Silently, now the sun
Walks the day as his work gets done;
This way,and that, he peers, and sees
Golden fruits upon golden trees;
One by one the casements catch
His beams beneath the golden thatch
Coming out of his kennel like a log,
His paws of golden wakes the dog;
From their golden cote their white breasts shakes
Oif doves in golden feathers wakes;
A harvest goes sleeping by,
With golden claws with silver eye;
And moveless fish in golden water,
By golden reeds in golden stream;

By: Walter de la Mare
Edited by: Isabelle Abigail Jatmoko 2

Anonymous said...

Dear Mr.Perico,

If I don't answer your question will I got "not good"in my poem?